Date: 2022-12-11 02:39 pm (UTC)
pebbleinalake: (flash: frost)
This is such a nice story! I love the spotlight on Mrs Hudson, and the part at the end with Holmes was so soft and sweet!

I really loved this line in particular: "The day before. And the day before. And all the days and all the befores." I couldn't really explain why, just the 'rhythm' of it flowed so nicely and really stuck out to me.

Very nice work! Hope you have a happy holiday!
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